Bori adoptable sample

Sorry for the watermark. One of my friends reported someone trying to use the pic I drew for her on their page, so now I'm a tad paranoid. Don't want any art thieving, now do we?

Anywho, this is a sample of my bori adoptables. They will be/are available on this page: [link]

Any critiques on it? Pweese? *puppy eyes*